A Lie So Small

[StevenF50]

Tears slowly drip onto the paper,
Drip, drip,
Drip, drip,
My mind full of hate and anger,
For something so nice it became so bitter,
The good times fading,
The bad times so clear,
A lie so small,
Became so big,
As I write my final words,
Onto the wet paper,
I imagine people been happy I'm gone,
I picture parties in my sorry brain,
I know I can't go on,
Everyone,
I loved despises me now,
Everything,
I had is gone,
I can put an end to all the sadness,
Enter a world of no sadness nor happiness,
I put the cold cruel knife against my chest,
And pierce my heart,
My final thought comes to me, what have I done?

P.S: My 20th poem to be published online so I tried to make it special, hope you like it :D

 

[Tall Ace]

I.. I just, I've been there too, not stabbing my heart, but my soul, my soul is broken down into many pieces, my mind is a mystery wrapped in a riddle, I remember the time I spent after the deed I did, it was painful, not physically but emotionally.
That day I did it, I got a sign, it was not my time, I couldn't leave all I had behind.
I wrote my final notes, things did not go as planned, if I did I wouldn't be here today...
So many painful memories..

 

[StevenF50]

Yeah, you know what I decided to do? I kicked pain in it's butt so it went flying away and got on in life and tried to enjoy myself.

 

[clemotz661]

my parents say, if there is one then there would be a lie lie next to us telling the truth

tongue sharper than a sword: D

 

[StevenF50]

I don't quite understand?

 

[nanang]

Is this a poem? or whether song lyrics :D

I liked it, although I'm not quite understand the meaning of this poem,
continue your creations

 

[StevenF50]

A poem and the meaning of the poem, what do you mean? A poem isn't made for a reason normally.

 

[piecakez]

This one is really really nice. I really enjoyed them. It's very deep as well. Make more poems.

 

[StevenF50]

Thanks for the comment.

 

[jordy214]

Very nice I enjoyed reading that. You are a great writer

 

[Jandra]

from start i feel something, i start feel what you feel. make me remember forgotten memories. memories full of her running to my side. her face, her hair, her scent, her smile all come together to my head...

after that this "Everyone, I loved despises me now".. never in my mind so the feeling gone.
different story.

Good poem :D

 

[StevenF50]

Tropical Storm Chantel

Well it looks like this is going to hit us. Though they think it will become a low and not be as powerful. That is good in a way. Though we still have a while for Hurricane season to be over. That and the peak of the season is between August and September.

 

[SniperFromHell]

I hate hurricane season! I read this morning that Chantal has dissipated into a tropical wave. It'll probably rain a ton, but that is normal for summer in Florida. Lol

 

[StevenF50]

Oh we got a lot of rain both Saturday and Sunday. Though more on Sunday.

 

[SniperFromHell]

Yeah, we've been getting quite bit this way too.

 

[Scarvejetesar]

Seems like nothing came of it. The way the La Nina is however it's likely the east coast of the US will get hit sometime this year. We'll be lucky if it doesn't.

 

[StevenF50]

Seems like nothing came of it. The way the La Nina is however it's likely the east coast of the US will get hit sometime this year. We'll be lucky if it doesn't.

We got about 10 inches of rain from the storm. No winds just rain.